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Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
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Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
Walk around like you own the place.
Maybe if you acted right, I would've stayed.
All you do is annoy me, give me some space!
Turned me into your own little maid!
I don't know why I stayed.
Today I'm climbing out this abyss
This is how I fucking get repaid?
And make sure I won't be missed.
I will never let you control me.
All I felt was helplessness.
Tonight I will be free.
But now I'm full of happiness.
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I don't know why I felt like making a poem. I was listening to some Eminiem music when I wrote this poem.
Maybe if you acted right, I would've stayed.
All you do is annoy me, give me some space!
Turned me into your own little maid!
I don't know why I stayed.
Today I'm climbing out this abyss
This is how I fucking get repaid?
And make sure I won't be missed.
I will never let you control me.
All I felt was helplessness.
Tonight I will be free.
But now I'm full of happiness.
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I don't know why I felt like making a poem. I was listening to some Eminiem music when I wrote this poem.
iLeo- Member
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Re: Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
It's pretty good. It seems kinda angsty.
Aaron- Dream
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Age : 27
Location : Central Cali Bitchez
Re: Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
Leo what the fuck, you stole like 4 of those lines from Eminems song 25 To Life. LOL.
Luck- War Veterans
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Re: Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
Lol I know, he inspired me.Luck wrote:Leo what the fuck, you stole like 4 of those lines from Eminems song 25 To Life. LOL.
iLeo- Member
- Posts : 14
Join date : 2012-08-21
Re: Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
Inspiration =/= Plagiarism.
And Plagiarism is taking another's work without identifying it as yours and passing it off as your own.
in case you were unaware.
And Plagiarism is taking another's work without identifying it as yours and passing it off as your own.
in case you were unaware.
Evan- War Veterans
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Join date : 2010-09-19
Age : 29
Location : South Cali Bitchez
Re: Just a poem I wrote, nothing special.
If someone inspires you like THAT, get in to karaoke.
Aaron- Dream
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Age : 27
Location : Central Cali Bitchez
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